http://lettered.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lettered.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] stoney321 2007-02-01 08:55 pm (UTC)

This is awesome. It reminds me of your Connor piece because the way you make each story fit the character is so unexpected. I never quite get how the story fits at first, then there's a *click* where I suddenly understand it, and when the click happens there's this amazing character insight you wouldn't've gotten otherwise.

I especially love Wesley's, the different ways the story fits. Love the image of Adam finding Abel's head. The first one was just heartbreaking, esp. this line: He finally let the others hold Connor when his mouth began to salivate every time the baby cried. Gunn's was particularly unexpected, and I loved this bit: hell yeah you're gonna have a change of heart.

The last one made me think a lot. I had to look up the story again. It seems to work in several different ways, each of which is powerful.

I really loved the art work you linked, too. It adds a lot to the story.

One little typo you might want to fix: Had Cain left a nightmare in his father's tent him to find? I think you mean for him to find...

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