lynnenne: (spike cross by slightlyiconic)
lynnenne ([personal profile] lynnenne) wrote in [personal profile] stoney321 2007-02-02 01:55 am (UTC)

Some great lines in this, Laura. I especially liked this:

How the fish's eyes rolled back, covered in a white membrane. How God really didn't like people to do for themselves.

You really capture Gunn's despair and self-loathing in that phrase. And the religious kink always does it for me. >:} Lovely job.


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